If I can make two suggestions: - Brighten the sand. Becasue of the headline I looked for the umbrellas. But without that they wouldn't have stood out from the image as much because they lack background separation. - I would crop a little bit to remove distractions from your main subject, particularly at the top and left. That way you get the curve of umbrellas start in power point 1 and end in 3, which is a great diagonal dynamic.
I am an accountant for a private oil and gas exploration company based in Houston, Texas. I'm a member of the Bay Area Photo Club and the Houston Center for Photogaphy.
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Great subject.
If I can make two suggestions:
- Brighten the sand. Becasue of the headline I looked for the umbrellas. But without that they wouldn't have stood out from the image as much because they lack background separation.
- I would crop a little bit to remove distractions from your main subject, particularly at the top and left. That way you get the curve of umbrellas start in power point 1 and end in 3, which is a great diagonal dynamic.
Hi Jan!
Thanks for the suggestions! I implemented them all and re-posted the new and improved image!
Cheers!
Barry
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